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Sheepgirl and Dino try and stop the city from being destroyed.
This is only the pilot to "Bunker City" I plan to continue with the series.
The characters look good and the idea of the story was okay, what really pushes me back a bit though are the backgrounds and the lack of definition in them.
I find it distracting how well the characters are drawn and then seeing the large color blobs with no edges take up the space around. Next episode you guys should really invest in more detail around the areas and work on resizing the characters in those places so they're not giants in one scene and dwarfs in the other.
Overall the style is good and the humor is doable. Looking forward to the next installment.
I actually plan to spend way longer on the next episode to make it actually look good, since truthfully I'm not to satisfied with how this turned out (I had a deadline). But the next one will hopefully be alot better.
At times funny and self aware. Animation was okay, lip synching is amazing. The timing when the lizard got his tail chopped off was... off. Get it? No but really, we couldn't see the lizards reaction to the cutting, and it lacked a cutting sound effect.
Which brings me to my other problem with this short: the sound is dreadfull, it lacks a lot of ambient sounds and sound effects in general, some voice actors have better sound than others, I could really go on forever.
Keep in mind, this isn't a rant, I like this short, but those nitpicks really keep it from being amasing. Nevertheless, pretty good damn job, I'm looking forward to more of your stuff.
Yeah I plan on working on the sound for the next episode to make it actually good or I'll get someone who actually knows what they're doing to do the sound.
(I really appreciate all the critiques by the way)
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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