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Nothing can stop human's greed. Unless some creatures more powerful than humans arrive on earth to bully them.
Thank you for your feedback. Any comment would be appreciated.
People are calling this creepy but its more disjointed or just plain weird (in a really amateurish way) than anything. The sound design and art style is meant discomfort you, but its not done in an organized way. And before you tell me that its your "style", this more of a lack of style. Its like you just put together a bunch of stuff that is vaguely discomforting. I suggest for your next one be a little more cohesive, let there be a method to your madness. Some great works of this style can really get under your skin. Check out Aaron Dilloway for some audio design inspiration! The idea was alright too, try to communicate that without text next time too, that will encourage you to make more powerful visuals
Thank you! Really really appreciate this feedback!
Talking about the visual, no, Sir, when I said that it's my style, I meant that. That is my style of drawing. That is the visual I want to draw when I make this animation. Exactly like that. But, yes, I agree on this one "its not done in an organized way". I'm still on my process to learn.
About the text, I thought that I have to put the text. Because, the quote from the book (I Am a Cat by Soseki Natsume) is my inspiration to make this animation. But thank you, your suggestion about no text would be my consideration when I make another animation in the future.
And yes, I'm going to check out Aaron Dilloway and also give it to the sounds and music director of this animation.
Thank you for the feedback and suggestions, Sir. Really need and appreciate it.
Creepy, I love it!
Thank you, Sir. Creepy sounds very nice.
5 stars for the cat
Thank you. You're gonna see me more often in the future. - cat
great movie, but animation... yeah i understand that main is idea, but movie looks disgusting. hard to watch it seriously
Thank you but that's my style, Sir. I won't change my style. I like to disgust people.
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