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Yeah, short little animation of band members bc I am a band obsessed loser :^)
(my voice acting in this is bad, I know)
(and I did a bad job at drawing Josh, whoops)
I like it! Pretty good.
I know you pointed it out already but, just try speaking a bit slower.
Looks like this is your first video here, i would love to see what else you make. We all gotta start somewhere, keep it up.
Thank you! I have a few other animations up on YouTube (and some KinzTube videos that I rather not speak of), so this isn't really my first animation lol. But thank you for the review! (ayyy, it rhymed)
I think this could be funny, but I couldn't really understand most of the words. The timing wasn't bad, just try to work on your enunciation.
Yeah, my voice acting sucks lmao
Lots of room for improvement...
Sound was probably the only good thing here, and it felt like you were just droning on. Don't use the same recording of 'Don't say" every time, changing how you say it can add some flavor to the video.
Animation or lack there of I should say. You essentially made a less interesting slide show, there are ways to use a less art style, or to do a slide show far better. But sticks with no animation on a white background is not it.
The plot/concept is fine, but you could go farther with it. Maybe even go as far as to make video shorts of what the person looks like saying that kinda thing.
All and all you at least made a working animation, but needs A LOT of improvement.
Okay, thanks for the advice!
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