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Last year we spent a lot of time trying to decide where dudes who dress like chicks should poop. Enjoy.
Okay, I'm just going to point out that I hope it's really you (Spencer Dobson) and this is truly original content... And folow that with, I know... Almost nothing on planet earth is really original anymore...
Over all (and four stars up there should be explanatory) this is great. You've taken a proper twist of logic and carried it well. For the production quality, also well done. Animation is as fluid as it needs to be, offering choppy bits for comical value, and you're consistent in the work. Audio was good, clear, understandable (okay, could take the voice work and dampen the echo-effect a little) And it sync'ed up well to the animation. (you'd be surprised how far south that can get)...
As for a suggestion for improvement... I do like to offer something you can do for the most improvement with the least extra effort... (I'm just guessing) The audio sounds like a live recording from a hall or auditorium setting, so there's that echo-effect. If you have Audacity (last I checked it's freeware) you can dig through some of the help files and forums, or even post to Newgrounds forums under audio-related questions for help on it... There are features that let you take out a lot of that echo, so with a little fiddling with it, you should be able to sound like your sitting in the living room (and yes, you can even keep the audience or even expand on their responses as required for comic sense)...
There's going to be some who might point to your style of drawing or framerate for smoothness, but that's a stylistic argument. NOT a quality argument. You've got a good thing here, and I get the feeling there's more to be said on the subject.
~Could go to the porn store and see if there's something so twisted that we might actually need to be concerned for the public.
~Maybe interview an "actual live pervert" to get "their" side of the story.
~What about the "Potty Police"??? Isn't the job of "Police" in general gritty, nasty, and thankless enough? We (the general public) have to put this kind of controversy on their shoulders too???
Anyways, You've done something I didn't mind watching the second time when I signed in (I don't always sign in to watch NG)... And that's actually pretty rare. Great work, and I honestly hope there's something up there you can use either with this project (as often projects are previewed on NG and "fixed" before publication) or with future projects. (and yes, please use anything)
Don't forget to breathe, relax, and keep on keeping on...
It is me. It is all original content. Thank you for your positive feed back. It's not echo it's room tone. It's a recording of a live stand up performance.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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