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Thank you for the constructive criticism I promise to do better next time.
It needs much more animation. Graphics are a stick figure and pictures. Comedy was lacking. It could be funnier, and have more original content.
Thanks for the criticism, I will try better next time.
i could see the potential, but it lacked life, it was too short, and the jokes are just pretty meh. try harder and give it another go i can see seeds for something great in here.
Kinda lame, overacted, underanimated, and not really funny.
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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