I want to start by apologizing in advance for anything I say that might offend you.
That said, here's my review.
I really thought it was bad. I couldn't really get into it. Even satire requires quite a bit of effort.
While I can commend your effort to create something for the enjoyment of others, You could have done so much more with it.
And the spelling errors? An awful choice. I was expecting to laugh, not lose brain cells.You can still achieve the same entertainment without murdering the english language. If you do make something like this in the future, please consider taking the time to spell things correctly. I promise you get better reviews when people can comprehend the stupidity a bit better. Even troll logic would be better than dialogue that sounds like fanfiction written by a 5th-grade student that's failing in english.