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Mr. Sticky star of Mr. Sticky Comics at http://www.mrsticky005.com fights his old man, Cranky Sticky in the ultimate battle!
Animation should be smoother. Graphics need color and detail. Comedy needs more jokes. It could be longer, and you should add audio.
Simple Criticism. Choppy Animation, no audio, boring story/fight. But of course theres still room for improvement as an artist. Keep it up.
Seriously though I appreciate the criticism and the encouragement.
Okay so there are many problems with this movie.
For one, there is zero audio, and believe me when I say audio is VERY important even if there's no dialogue.
Secondly, while the style of the whole thing being like a comic may sound okayish on paper, it does not work for an animation, at least one like this. You should have really just made each strip a full screen experience without giving an awkward, lazy comic feel.
Thridly, while the animation is... ehhhhhh not ehhh, naaaa... there is much to be desired from it. Parts of the weird comic panel outlines disappear, it lacks any pacing and it's VERY sketchy.
Finally, it's SHORT. Like, very short. 15 seconds for a fight animation is nothing.
I can only cut you so much slack for your first movie, I just didn't really enjoy it.
Hopefully you will improve and make awesome animations in the future.
Damn I am just happy that someone actually watched this and even took the time to criticize it.
That is totally fair that you didn't like it and a lot of what you said seems valid.
Still for me, I consider this an accomplishment even if I still have a long ways to go.
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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