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It´s short but i wanted to upload it. I hope you enjoy this animation
I liked it wish is a bit longer with more blood
You did a great job on drawing the weaponry but the perspective looks a bit strange.
The way the soldiers are standing and moving is not really appropriate for the background used.
It's an overhead shot combined with ground level soldiers.
The angle you selected would mostly show the top of the soldiers head.
This is going to be a difficult angle to work with.
When drawing a new angle.
be sure to draw a bit more slowly since attempting difficult angles can sometimes make focusing on the lines a bit harder.
you've attempted a pretty advanced drawing skill.
Perspective is not easy but you'll master it with a bit of practice.
Keep trying and stay motivated.
as for my other criticism.
Just make the movie a bit longer since good characters, a story and plenty of action will make for an entertaining stick figure movie.
better luck next time.
Ok, thanks for the tips
Cool. You are doing pretty good work here.
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