Friend decides to give his friend a stripper for his birthday but things don't go as expected.
Nice animation
Haha ok so this was funny I like it got a few laughs for this one you should ad more jokes and much more humor around your main idea here but for the most part this was pretty amazing so nice little film you have here
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More humor of course
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Heh, well I did achieve a chuckle, but feels like the delivery could've been a bit more direct. Idea's good, but the dialog leads the way a a bit much, would've been better if the stripper appears before it's all properly explained, maybe? Also kinda... mild party scene at the beginning. Feels like you could do more with this, but not bad!
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Thank you for the feedback. You made some really good points for me to think about. Thanks again!
The character designs are ok, but they work well with the overall mood of the short.
The story was good.
The lipsync was good but not great.
Not bad:)
Thanks for the feedback!
I wasn't expecting that. Very funny. Keep up the good work!
Thank you, much appreciated!