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Woah Thanks a lot for the front page ! :)
My biggest project so far. Took me 1 year and half
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-Additional Effects -
Reb - http://rebwastaken.deviantart.com
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Other Marvel animations
Spidey vs Black Cat - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fHPTjGns6ag
Spidey chasing bad guys - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H7pQRhzIBsw
Great animation, but the anatomy is off, the torsos were square and fat and stubby, A muscular male torso is usually thinner at the hips and wider at the chest, and for a female torsos the thinnest part is at the middle of the torso (like an hour glass), the torso for normal adults should be proportioned about 2 and a half heads tall, or else they'll look too short, and the most important part, the part that most artist's miss is the spine, it has to have a curve to it from the side, if it doesn't, it makes them look like a cylinder and just unnatural.
But what really made this movie shine was the animation, not even most tv cartoons put that many frames into their fight scenes as you did, the special effects were good the sound timing was in good sync and the shading was awesome! (I have no clue how you did that.)
Overall good movie. Hopefully your next one will be even better!
Don't take this the wrong way I'm just trying to help. Keep at it!
Thanks a lot for that complete review, and no worries, I really appreciate critics, good or bad.
nice use of after effects and animation, great job!
Good video quality, good audio, and good special effects.
Character designs are ok and they work with the rest of the movie.
What is Spiderman swinging from at 1:42? They're in the middle of a vast desert. What's the other end of that web attached to? The moon?
I GUESS the animation is done well? But I don't understand the point of it. I don't see any artistic merit to this or entertainment value. None to me at least. I could only see it having appeal to someone who has a raging boner for marvel comics material.
This animation is honestly great. You chose a realistic art style, shaded it, made the quality and sound quality great. Things DO look a little off at times, such as Hawkeye's whole head and face here at 1:16, and the slowmotion frontview scene of quicksilver running, and some details on characters. Hawkeye and Scarlet witch in general look off, and when Ironman fires his shoulder-rockets, when they hit the AIM shoulders, no other sound or form of damage is shown. Oh, and the aim soldier spider-man web blasts looks a little weirdly shaded. But this was still fucking awesome cause there was so much other great shit in this animation.
For Hawkeye and Scarlet witch. there's definitely something off, i won't make the same mistakes next time.
Thanks for that constructive feedback, I appreciate it and thanks a lot for the other points;
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