My patience Leveled up after this ;)

I liked how you tried to create your own original music for your animation, but, your animation was sort of hard to follow, and didn't have that many frames to make it look some what decent. The art was bland and boring, and could use a lot of improvement. I suggest looking up animators on YouTube, or on Newgrounds, and watching how they draw and animate to get a feel of how it's done. You can always try to draw cartoons from other creators you like to try and get the hang of drawing, and eventually making you own style.