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Only 3 stars because of the patreon request. You have very much potential, but you need to invest more time in this. Don't use loops, draw every frame. I know it takes much time, but it will make the animation ten times better. Don't ask us too donate at the beginning of the video, make your content so good people want to donate. I would also suggest making your animations a little bit longer. Keep making animations, I realy like them.
I agree with the other comment. The art is good but the animation mainly loops, and 80% of this video is text, credits, and a request for money. Maybe at least take out the patreon request from the beginning of future animations and slap it on the end if it needs to be there at all. That definitely sets a poor tone for the viewer off the bat. I'm not saying this so you'll check my channel and decide my videos gave you AIDs now too, this is a genuine attempt to help you improve your videos! Your artwork is really nice :)
I think everyone's missing the part where I wrote "...or not. It's your decision" on the Patreon ad.
I'd like to clarify that all funds from Patreon go straight to my cartoons (buying better equipment, hiring assistant animators/ voice actors, etc) and that it's optional and not a paywall.
Thanks for the compliment btw!
1/3 begging for cash
[looks at your content and sees InvaderZim wannabe shit]
I think you just gave me cancer
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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