Notbad

Well that was interesting with a text based game they can be tricky I think adding on some form of of visuals maybe in the corner or top would be a plus for the game, but for the text based element you hit it out of the park

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This is just a planet of the apes ripoff, it has quite a few grammar and spelling issues and is really boring. Try to make something a little more original, get somebody to read what you wrote and make it longer, and you will be heading in the right direction.

As others already mentioned, you should really work on those spelling errors. The story is really well done and thrilling, but the spelling mistakes are kinda ruining it. Overall great game tho.

Aside from the simple and sometimes erroneous text, I rather liked it! The layout was perfect and easy to read. Checkpoint system worked very well. The script could've been a little more descriptive, and the addition of a few scenery pictures, would've made this game perfect.

Its good but grammar issues and there was a swear word and this is an E rated game. So you should make the game rating higher.