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The Adventure Satchel - Pilot - Part 2

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rated 2.58 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Experimental
Tags:
adventure
comic
book
narration

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Nov 3, 2016 | 10:23 PM EDT

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Author Comments

Max follows the clue left behind by Archimedes in order to find out where he is and what all this might mean.

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GuardiraGuardira

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Great comic and voice-over!

Perhaps your can later try some vocal synth to fit the environment and/or characters.

That said, I verily enjoyed your pilot!


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JRRun responds:

Cheers Guardira!
Ah - good idea regarding the 'environmental sound' aspect as well (will have to keep that in mind...)
Thanks for all the support thus far!


arianna1arianna1

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Very interesting story, kind of Dan Brown-like. I hope to see more of this story soon!


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JRRun responds:

Cheers arianna1! Glad you're enjoying it thus far. There is certainly more on the way too!