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--Extreme Vulgar Language--
--Viewer Discretion is Advised--
Animated by The Animation Wheel
Music by Bo Burnham
Thanks for watching! ;)
I'll first point out that it's generally rare for me to even watch music vid's most of the time. That said, this was fun... good work.
My only relevant suggestion might fall along similar lines to others about not quite so much text, but especially once a line or portion has been explained. I get that some of us have "slow ears" so you're saving us some of the effort to understand completely, and good for you. But I might suggest you try adding symbolism in lieu of text with repetitive phrases. A little more illustrative animation is great, too. I'm sure right off the top of your head you could stretch out a great variety of quick flashable symbols or icons for "fucked"... It would be great fun to see what and how many you could put in this thing if you get the chance for a revisit... remix... redux... whatever... :)
Just think about it. I only hope to help...
This was great, tip. Next time dont use as much animated typography for the lyrics, add some more different animation to it. All in all. good job.
My only issue with this otherwise great music video is how for the last thirty seconds or so it was almost completely textytexty which was kind of lame. I'm not bitching that you should've animated the whole thing but I think it would've been better if you spreaded the animation out more. But like I said, the animation was amazing and matched the song perfectly.
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