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Working with Mr MDU this is his new channel introduction if you like to visit the page can be found below:
Special thank you to @Daydream-Anatomy checkout his channel below for epic music:
Besides that thanks to Newgrounds and all of you guys, cheers.
Hey Wondermeow! There are a few issues, but they aren't major.
The music in the intro decreases suddenly when you cut to the first shot after the title card.
The music is unbalanced with the audio. It is too low at the beginning, and it overpowers the dialogue at some point.
Lastly, the last cut is weird. You cut the last two shots while you're fading out, that doesn't look too well.
I hope I don't sound too harsh. Your stuff definitely has potential. I look forward to seeing more of your stuff!
Thanks mate always grateful for the feedback yeah the intro is quite old but a classic i keep reusing when it comes to the music being played on the background. As for the unbalanced music the musician that assisted gave one copy that overpowered the audio with 2 separate pieces he cut up for me to use so i ended up doing that part myself, i'm not really a pro music guy go figures, lol. As for the ending he was changing back to himself again probably didn't make the scene long enough but i was ok with it, cheers mate.
good job dude
the animation is a little choppy, but it's still pretty good
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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