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the vatikan is evil
Cool video, hyped for the next two episodes!
Especially in the intro, the camera angles were really cool! The 3d elemens worked really nicely as well. The voice acting was also pretty decent. The music fit the mood of the situations as well.
The diction of the narrator was sometimes on the poorer side. It got hard to understand him from time to time. The horizon of the video would be either black or white and seemed like it appeared way too soon in the video; if it could be pushed back a bit, it would be really nice. There was a scene or two where the sounds of the footsteps didn't really line up with the character's walking. I think this was most noticable in one of the first few walking scenes. There also is a few times where the dialog feels like it was places in an unnatural place, be it too close or too far apart. The music cut out once or twice and it made it feel really weird. Maybe it was just to restart the song, but still. Also, when things got a little more action-y, the camera started getting really choppy and it started to look really weird. Smoothen it up a bit and it could be really nice!
All in all, it's good, but it's raw. Very raw. Excited to see what is to come in the future!
The second chapter will be nice polished smooth and so on..I'm interestd more in the concept and core of the story but you bastards seems to shit everytime over my doings!....JUST KIDDiNG,I know this all,thanks for the rewiev and the time..The reason why I decidedto pubblish it in a raw form couse integrate 3d with 2d requires a lot of time ..god damned my pc blows up in the conversion of frames ..so for example when I sow a mistake after the conversion of a day,well. .I simply closed an eye. .hahaha
Holy shit that was awesome! How did you accomplish combining the 3d elements? Great camera work and editing!
Unexpected rewiew Man,I expected other negative critic comments hahaha.Please share this episode if you can,I will do much better in the 2 chapter.Trust me
Ur animation is not bad. But you're audio seems like complete shit. You could do better. I believe in you
Agree on the audio hahaha
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