So it's been a while but I actually finished Episode 2... I kind of fell into the same trap I did with Episode 1, constantly adding or removing things, redrawing the older parts and getting into this constant loop of trying to fix everything.
But here it is ^_^ I guess Episode 1 was like the test pilot and this is where I'm trying to define where the series will go. Now it's just a case of breaking down the plot points into manageable segments... I don't think another 19 minute long episode is the way to go >_<
Thank you to everyone who helped with this, especially the wonderful voice cast who lend their talent to my dumb anime bullshit.
I'm starting work on Episode 3 really soon, so if anyone is interesting in being part of the project, drop me an IM ^_^