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Opening scene where John skip stones at the tier.
You need to make the background more quality because one scene you can see the pixels
Thank you for your comment, you are quite right :-)
Not bad, if you did the scenario, it's really beautiful.
The only thing I disliked is that if you compare John with the scenario gives me a strange feel. Older cartoons do this, but they usually draw a black outline in the characters.
If you want to use these detailed scenarios I suggest you to begin draw black outlines in the characters. The animation still cool, good work!
I did everything :-) And thank you for the interesting comments on black outlines for John, I will consider it!
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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