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Just a dumb short for practice. Constructive criticism and hateful critiques welcome.
Nice animation, very funny. I can understand why some people don't like the audio, but I think the quiet screaming from the flower made it funnier.
There's good animation, and the concept is decent, but the sound quality could be improved. Would be a lot better if the yelling sounded less muffled.
Got three laughs out of me in under thirty seconds, animation was very smooth and well executed, the cut to the live action clip made it even funnier, and you managed to expose bees for the ruffians that they truly are beneath the helpful facade. Excellent work!
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it, and see bees for the true menace to society that they are
Nice art style and animation skills.
The whole story (and specially the "twist" at the end) was funny.
The only down point with this piece it's the audio, it could use some extra work on both voice acting and sound effects.
Completely agree with you. I'm not a very audio savvy guy, but I'll definitely work to make the next submission less harsh on the earballs. Thanks for the review
I really liked the humor in this, the expressions were really well done, and the animation on the bee slamming into the characters was hilarious. Really great work dude!
Thanks man, I appreciate it
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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