You have some really amazing pixel/sprite work but there's not much substance to the story. It's not compelling and a bit blatant.

Stuff like(not exactly what you did but how it comes across):
"I"mmmmmmm singing about character development, because I am a character"
"I'm really upset right now so now I guess I just won't be and do something else?"
"I'm in trouble so I should transform, *transforms* woah! Who expected that!?"

I'm not trying to sound mean, I just need to make sure what I'm saying is exaggerated enough that you understand my point. I also point this out because the entire feel of the toon comes off as serious with humor sprinkled in(not a total comedy) so when these type of lines happen the viewer is supposed to take it seriously but can't.

So all of this was animated? In that case, this is one of the best looking sprite animations I have seen in a long time. I adore everything about this! Love the animation, sprite work, the color scheme, the character designs, voices, music, etc. One of my next favorites. Keep up the amazing work! :)