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Bad audio, bad animation, bad drawing, anything else?, im so f*cking bad but i try xD
Song : Tristania - Beyond the Veil
This is pretty good for an unfinished version
Nice animation! Very fluid and nice music!
To take care:
-I know that it's just an unfinished project, but, to the final version try to add more details in the body of Bardoc and Turles, the outline sometimes is very thin, so try to add more thickness to the shape.
-Some FPS have a little bit bad quality than others and you can see the diference meanwhile the animation flows and displays a bad unity between FPS.
-Animating and drawing effects like explotions and energy powers are a bit difficult, try to add glow and lightnings in the FX, it will be very awesome!
-Music is good, but i prefer only instrumental part, just a personal taste, and i suppose you'll add a lot of SFX, which are going to give a very nice ambientation with the music
Very nice! i can't wait to see it finished!
The music is a nice touch and adds intensity to the battle. Your animation is pretty good, too. However, you need to be more consistent with your drawing. Some frames look better than others because you obviously don't put in the same amount of effort into each frame. You need to be able to draw things so they match in different frames.
For example, in the opening animation before I even click the play button, Bardock's hand and body are both poorly drawn. Then a few frames into the movie, you drew Bardock much better. You can't have him drawn well in one frame and then drawn somewhat poorly in the next one. That's not good quality work and you need to fix that before you finish this.
So, in summation, what you really need to improve is your consistency, so your frames match up with each other. Put the same amount of effort into each frame and make sure you don't leave out certain details because that happened a lot here, too. For example, you'd have the lines on Bardock's armor in one frame and in the next they'd be gone.
A lot of work needs to be put into this to make it a good final project, so I hope you commit and make this a really good animation! As a Dragonball Z fan, I'll be looking forward to it! You can do it! :)
I like the fight music, I cannot wait to see the full version!
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