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A short for Creep Jam. Wandering into a still woodland takes a turn for the spooky.
This was an interesting animation for me. It definitely fell outside of my usual comfort zone and some corners were cut due to time, but I think the result is pretty decent.
I liked the rhyming, poem like narration! The use of purple was nice. Simplistic and original story, structured like a classic kid's storybook. I enjoyed this!
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The voice work was decent, although it was muffled. I liked the animation here too. Just as a suggestion, maybe you could have had something glint in the dark at the very end, like maybe the fangs of the monster or part of the eye. Just to add to the creepy factor.
The sounds are actually kinda off, especially the voice actor, but I do find it very poetic. Amazing creation, good animation, but.. I'm just missing the sound effects. And the voice. Do some improvements on that.
Thanks for the critique. Sounds were definitely rushed due to time on my end, so they unfortunately took a quality hit. I did the voice work myself, its something I don't do often but want to try and improve at. But I do appreciate the feedback, helps me know where to look to improve.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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