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Ricegum these kids must be stopped animated clip, this is my first animation so please give me tips to improve
Well, I really hate Ricegum, but for a first animation this was actually really good.
However, you need to smooth out your lines and at some points the lip syncing was off, there are lots of tutorials on YouTube to help with this so if you want to improve just search up what you want to learn with "flash tutorial" at the end.
Hope this helped.
Thanks for this comment, I will try to improve on these things :)
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