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This is my first animation, and my newgrounds premiere coinciding with the theme of creepjam.
I hope you like it.
And since I'm learning any review is more than welcome.
Fantastic for your first animation! It looks very nice, one thing that you could improve would be making the movements more fluid, but other than that, great job! ;)
I love classic Halloween-ish haunted house visuals, like what you opened with. Good stuff. Nice FBF work on the flying bat animation. The real life photos of Bela Lugosi and such were just a bit jarring against the cartoony aesthetic, though. It ended with a joke, which isn't my thing personally, but if that's your style then hey, you do you. Overall, not a bad little toon!
Thank you very much for your comment. As for the pictures, he started being more a personal joke than anything else, but because I wanted to make it funny I left there, later i see that broke with the aesthetics of animation, so I totally agree with what you say, of all ways i'm starting still trying things to find my own style, but I think maybe comedy is not my thing :)
Pretty good, definitely liked the animation! :D
Thank you !
Really good for a first animation, keep it up.
I cracked up on the sudden wink. You obviously draw good, but the movement of the characters fail a bit. I'd rather watch a smooth stickman animation than a good drawn animation with bad and laggy movements.
My own problem is that I draw bad, but I know the ease in and out techniques fairly well from stop-motion animations. To your defence, though, I'm still learning to do this digitally.
Thanks for your comment! It is true that I have more knowledge of drawing which animation,
but I'm still learning, I hope that with practice and time i make my animations more fluid.
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