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This is the first animation i'm uploading to a channel i'm making.
check it out if you liked it :)
You have the obvious talent/skill for this. It's a good clean animation with proper sound quality and good voice acting. Nothing's overdone, but it achieves everything intended for what it is... It seems somewhat either incomplete or rushed, so you might go to the end and work out something for a better finish...
Actually (originally) a homunculus comes from the Latin of Rome being the diminutive (suffix -ulus) of hommus (meaning "man")... It was legendarily meant to reference a "little man" that was supposedly produced when criminals were executed, since bodily fluids were often released (yes, even those fluids) at executions... Some would suggest it could only happen at certain phases of the moon or for other "spiritual" or "metaphysical" reasons, but supposedly the thing was always demonic and generally bad news... -Please duly note here, I'm only pointing this out as the original story of the thing because so many think the later cartoon varieties are original, and sadly too few don't really know just how sick, gross, and screwed up our ancestral stories really got... ;)
As for Spaceballs, try any DVD player or some rental service over the net... Surely Mel Brooks isn't forgotten already...
Like the egg and the loose reference to Alien... as much as Spaceballs, so you could run either way on this one... It's still funny, just more of a light giggle than a full laugh...
Yep, you are right, i do tend to rush my work because i always get excited when i'm about to finish.
I should really work on that, also, my art does need a good clean up, that's something i never notice once i'm finish, i always notice it once i already post it.
Thanks for your sincere critic, don't doubt that it will help me grow, can't wait to post more of my work here :)
As for the Homunculus, i actually didn't know about all that, it's (Like most Roman facts) really interesting and i wish i had that in consideration while making this.
Mel Brooks will never be forgotten, no matter how hard some people try.
Stick around and i'll make sure to get that full laugh someday.
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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