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A spin on Zero's death scene in Megumanu X.
Inb4 "Tastes like Egoraptor", although the art style and choice of colors were very good, and cartoonish in his typical way. Every single frame looks good, but it would be better with more of them! I also actually liked that the sound effects were just your voice, it added to the humor. That being said, higher audio quality would be nice. The audio as presented is... whispy? Yeah, whispy.
i actually really enjoyed this, things were mostly moving and it didnt depend on tweeting and stuff. great job.
Not too bad for a first animation, it's sort of charmingly bad, I guess that's sort of what you were going for considering you made all the sound effects with your voice. One thing I really have to say is get a better microphone, because the audio quality was really not good. It's very Egoraptor-esque, which is kind of pleasant to me because I love his stuff. Particularly the shading style and the overall art style remind me of Ego's work. The visuals overall look kind of sloppy, especially with the coloring, so maybe make them a little more polished next time. But it's kind of a charming sloppiness I'll give you that. Also I found what was happening overall a bit hard to follow, so I'd recommend maybe making it more clear, I get the concept of "show don't tell" but the showing in my opinion needs to be done a bit better. I didn't really get the joke at all due to my difficulty following what was happening. But this looks to be your first ever cartoon, so for a first animation not bad, certainly a hell of a lot better than my (now deleted) first animation.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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