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The First Revelation

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rated 3.65 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Comedy - Original
Tags:
funny
lol
wow
revelation

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Uploaded
Sep 1, 2016 | 8:39 PM EDT

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Author Comments

This is a true story that happened to me when I was seven years old. Long story short.. Lesson learned. Make sure to Subscribe to my Youtube Channel - https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCytDlXwK2pHG7zTdkLqarMw

Reviews


Joverseer916Joverseer916

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Eh. Story is pretty funny in a God-awful, damn that sucks type of way. Animation on the other hand... barely qualified as animation. Very little in the way of moving parts. Story was the only thing that kept me and not the art style. Then again, you never promised anything else than a story so I guess its not too bad.


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Tellmytale responds:

Thanks for the criticism! I will definitely try to improve the animation. I started recently. It's going to take time but I am sure I can improve Quality. Thanks again!


VicDosyaVicDosya

Rated 5 / 5 stars

funny and fartastic


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Tellmytale responds:

Thanks a lot! A share would help.


xGunBladexxGunBladex

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Really good man. Keep it up.


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Tellmytale responds:

Thank you. I will continue to make more videos!