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Mindless rambling about how a boy did not take a girl on a movie date.
The high-school-teenager-doodling-in-notebook aesthetic was intended.
It reminded me we live in a fractured reality, and how one man's illusion is another's infinite hallucination of life is a state of flux. This is art.
That's some good writting man. Cool video.
I like the slice of life thing.
Pretty neat monologue. About as slice of life as it gets. I like the simplicity of the animation, just enough to complement the narrative without being overwhelming or distracting. Well done.
Also LEVEL 30 GET HELL YEAHHHHHHH!!!!
This was pretty decent.
Your artwork and animation was easy on the eyes and stylized well, and worked for what you seemed to be going for.
The music was quiet and set the mood nicely. I'm glad it wasn't too loud -- a lot of people make that mistake. The voice wasn't bad, seemed a little droning at times and at certain points was hard to understand with volume at a consistent average level. Most of it I could hear/make out fine though. I guess a better way to put it would be that the narrator almost seemed congested at times?
The story was alright, and I guess more unique than some other ones about similar experiences/topics. Sometimes these sorts of mini 'stories' can be really common and overdone, and even executed really similarly, but yours didn't totally bore me or draw me away like some others do. Your storytelling was simple and to the point which I appreciated. No convolution or annoying bits added, just good transitions and interesting enough to follow along with.
Overall you did a good job and I hope you expand on more projects like these, and try different things with this style.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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