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Box V.S. Paper - Say it l

August 13, 2016 –
December 20, 2023
This entry was deleted.

Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.

Author Comments

This short is a 24 fps animation (a slight improvement from 12 fps)

Because we need more BFDI and Box V.S. Paper.

NOW WITH SUBTITLES! [Fixes]
MORE QUIET MUSIC!

Reviews

I really struggled to understand what was being said most of the time as the background music really competed with your audio, so it was a good move including subtitles.

I tend to see a lot of animations that use characters like yours, and they're generally done so the animator doesn't need to put the effort in by drawing human characters. I mean, the animation had nothing to do with them being boxes or paper, so it just seems a tad lazy.

Visuals were nice. Dialogue was utter jibberish but I had a laugh.

<deleted> responds:

ill lower the music in a minute or so. and yeah i talk really fast sometimes. you can blame me for that.

I can't stop laughing tbh-- The only thing I hate is how loud the music is The animation is good, too!

<deleted> responds:

well i dont know how to fix the music thing without recreating another .mp3 file of the quiter version

If you brought the audio down on the voices this would be better, they max out their parameters a lot and distort.

<deleted> responds:

ive added subtitles and i tried to change the publish settings to fix it but it didin't work

"Johnny, not too loud or you gonna kill mah ears"
This sounds like you were trying to record a line for an animation, and this is a blooper. I like bloopers.

<deleted> responds:

yeah it was troubles with audacity testing for animation testing for voice acting

The music is far too loud in contrast to the vocals and I can't understand what they're even saying.

<deleted> responds:

that is now fixed. i have added subtitles!

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2.57 / 5.00