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This is my submission for NG's pt. 3 "summer toon"Sound Jam contest (It was fun woot). .. and especially big thumbs up for jenninexus' voice aid (u go girl!)
A little, unhappy girl gamer is all complaints till a true realization scores!
Comments welcome (much apologies for the .swf size (3d tooning .flv imports haha big), but if internet sluggish u can watch the entire video here on NG yah... Hope u enjoy)!
Thanks again kryson (had to youtube upload 3 separate .mp4s for a full merge; u can finally grab the video here on NG hah).
The biggest issue I have with this is the sound. It seems like it was an after thought. Some audio files overlap others - this wouldn't be a problem if their volume was properly adjusted. In this case - it's not. It's terriblely done even. I cannot understand what the Girl gamer is saying sometimes, either because of a zombie, or because of an explosiong.
Both the 2D and 3D styles are...grotesque. I wouldn't mind it that much if the animation was more fluid and less static. The characters seem to have a maximum of four frames or whatever.
I can't really grasp what the fuck the idea behind this is either. What the fuck is she talking about? I don't think I'm particularly smart or anything, but I like to think I'm not a retard who can't understand the premise of flash animations. It's unclear what's is going on.
What the fuck was that strange laughter? Why was she laughing and flying and why did the camera changed view to the 3D model of the MC when the other female character was talking?
Clarity is missing.
Thanks your in-depth comment #Jotaro97 (yeah I agree about the sound effects mishmash (I didn't have much time to think, so I added almost anywhere; it would've been nice to have the time to use specific sound effects for specific actions but I had no time to contemplate ugh).
And sorry to hear the story confused (didn't have time to do 2d clean-up, but i'll send u a PM to explain thanks).
And no worries man (yer words and insight much appreciated (u definitely ain't dumb).
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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