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Tried to put together a little narrative for this one, was a fun experiment to base the whole thing around the sfx.
I like your visual story telling a lot, but the movements feel choppy, jumpy, floaty etc. You clearly have a good understanding of drawing body's and poses though, so it still works, just a thing to practice. The sound effects were placed and timed well, but some of the audio felt peaky
Yeah that's been a pretty consistent issue with my animation so hopefully it will have improved a bit by my next video, thanks for the feedback!:)
Yeah, it really did feel like the sound fx were the main focus. And the action was pretty darn cool; you have this neat way of using a minimal amount of motion to great effect.
Thanks, I really appreciate that! I tried to stay away from using music to keep the focus on the sfx so I'm glad that payed off haha
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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