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Supermen 1

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rated 2.52 / 5 stars
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Jul 19, 2016 | 4:36 PM EDT

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Superman gave the young man a crystal that gave him full kryptonian powers of which he is using as a return mechanism for Superman to escape the rip in the phantom zone, by virtue of D.N.A.
As the young man receive full Kryotnian powers, he uses it and push a phantom zoner named Nyra out of the way allowing Superman to go in the portal to begin his mission.

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Psycho666Psycho666

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

My word, man! That was mighty painful to be hearing! Round up a couple of your friends and record your voices over what you've done here.



DoctNikDoctNik

Rated 0 / 5 stars

First of all, what the fuck was that start? You jumped into it way to fast man, what happened that made the young man thank him? How did that guy not recognise superman? Why did Superman give a random guy his dna to save the day? out of laziness? I mean he didn't even know the guys name! honestly! Put more effort into how the story starts.

Ok, so Rojay just grabs Nyra and that's it? And what the fuck was that face she made? She looked more horny than anything. And then she rubs his face! What the fuck man!

Really man? Really? When superman gets into the phantom zone he goes on a monolouge overexplaining what he's going to do next. You've been told time and time again that this is a BAD THING nobody appreciates you treating your viewers like children.

Why did you throw in that last bit where he saves the cop from being mugged? It was unnecesary and unrelated to the flow of the story so far.

I can see you have potential but until you put actual effort into your work I can't see your career in animation going anywhere. All your animations are are fantasys of what you want your life to be like, meaning this is designed for your enjoyment rather than the viewers. Think about that.


Rojay101 responds:

you need to see episode zero, that will tell you why Superman gave him his D.N.A. Look before you talk! The last bit is part of the story and as it develops more, that random act will influenced the character to feel obligated to help people. As for the character Nyra , she is a sexually driven kryptonian I created and when she touched Rojay's face, she did something specific; which will be revealed in episode 2. Next you are partially right about one thing, it is for my enjoyment and a fantasy of what I want to create NOT what I want my life to be. As for career, I have one and it is good enough for me. In relation to animation little man, It is my Hobby, that is right.. creating choppy animation and certain concepts and I am doing just that. next time examine everything before commenting. Thanks for your constructive criticism anyway.


AndrewDeSessoAndrewDeSesso

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

i vote 3 because i like it but still only rate it 2.5. u had an amazing story being told, but it seemed like superman never stopped talking. its like a parody of dragonball z or bleach or something where they just never get to the point and fight until after like more 7 episodes.


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Rojay101 responds:

ok thanks


Fantasy-XFantasy-X

Rated 5 / 5 stars

neat customization of charcters, be careful of the audio output, love the content, hope it work out for you.



Zeckrom77Zeckrom77

Rated 5 / 5 stars

your art is unique and it is evident that is your drawing styles, love the design that you make for each character. Love the idea of your story want to see what would happen.