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Fairly proud of how certain shots here came out but I feel like I could have pushed the narrative more
half a star for trying this and the other half for the noises in the background it could have done with some actual talking on the presidents part instead of those hand, head and mouth movements and it would have been funny as hell if the president got crushed by a robot
So adding voice acting to the president and then having him crushed would be worth 4 stars? I'd be interested if you had any other criticisms that would help me to improve the quality of my animation in a general sense, rather than comedic/editing choices, thanks for the feedback nonetheless.
I always love how your animation looks, even though it looks a bit inconsistent at times, i love it, and i liked the idea, good work boyo
Thanks man, yeah i still have a lot to learn about staying on model but I think it's an improvement over my last video haha :)
I like it a lot, but there should have been a story or something :T (Animation is gr8 tho)
Yeah I agree, thanks for the feedback!
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