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v 2.1 (NEW improved Preloader)
This is my very first ever flash film.
It took me a week of hard work.
I hope you enjoy.
I have taken all your reviews seriously and thank you for them.I take all of what is said into account.Thanks.
CAN YOU PLEASE LEAVE A REVIEW
Dont be too harse.
As it is my first ever flash movie
Hope you all like it
P.S. Jimmo 2 has been started and it is were Jimmo arrives in his NEW town Oakington to find his NEW house.
Also Final Finale is getting on well it should be here mid 2003.
Wow, first flash in a week..
Hm, it seems you didn't take your time. Learn to animate better and maybe draw better, then think of a good story and and take some time on it. Not bad for your first flash, but sorry, I can't go easy on you. I know how hard a first flash can be.. just take your time
Weather or not it sucked dosn't change the fact that I do hope you make more flash animations if not only for the fact that I do actually see some potential in your skills at flash . . . now that I actually think about it that was awsome for your first flash animation.
can it be, that i saw this some time ago without sound ???
if so, i think it's also good after the second time. for the first flash this was very good...if i think of my first one, hehe.
well try on and i'm looking forward to hearing from u again...piece
Yes you probably did see this some time ago without sound and now it is here with w00000000.
Thanks for the support and I am getting hard into my website and my 2nd flash animation.
You will hear from me again.
Check out my NEW site www.twistedtimes.0catch.com
Haha, I remember that situation from somewhere =)
Nice try, I'd say!
And a good thing you put that blam-piece in the portal, cuz otherwise I wouldn't have know this was here.
But as review:
I think it's a really nice try for humor. It's not easy to make something really funny.
The graphics arn't like those high-quality flashmovies, but hey: this is your first flash ever.
And ok, the ending was a bit weird. Could have been a few seconds shorter, don't you think?
And what do you mean with those familiar faces in the sequel?? =) (or am I not to know yet?) =)
No, in short: It's good, but not that good. But that's because the lak of multiple voices and the low-quality graphics.
But like it always go: you learn while doing. And I'm sur that one day you'll win an award! (if you just keep on trying)
Keep it up!
Thank you very mush Smos
Yep I thought no one has viewed this piece for ages and its the 1st and only piece I have ever done and I love it. so as I updated it I thought ummmmmmm lets remind people Jimmo is still alive on NG.
For the next animation I will release is going to be very funny , well I think any way.(wheelchair)?????
As for the gfx I was going to do stickmen but thats not creative. So I hust used the best art I could and drew Jimmo and the tramp just grew on my mind.
For v 1.9 I'll make it abit shorter ok.
As for the sequal I carnt say it may have some info on our site.???????HINT HINT.
So for next time better gfx and multiple voices and more humour thanks.
It's not really funny, but of course it is just a start. With sound and some kind of a funny finish I would have given this a 6 or even a 7. I do want to thank you though for actually putting some effort into this short. With some practice I can see you putting out some good stuff.
To make it really funny I wudda needed voices and I dont no how to do it.
I'll work on the ending.
Thanks at least u appreciate how hard these are to make thanks alot.
Can any 1 help me with a preloader and voices.
An infernal battle between gold and acid.
Are you feeling it now, Mr. Krabs?
Too much coffee for Pencilmate...!
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