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Hope he doesn't kill somebody, like the president or something.
its my first full length animation heehee
As stupid as that seems, it gave me a good laugh, so I'll give you 5 stars lol
The art wasn't too bad either. It wasn't great, but it was pretty good
Hahaha Nice mate!
Good start for a first animation. In my opinion the connection between the notebook and the death of the president wasn't very coherent. From the source content I know that the writer needs a name and a face, which is why light's shock confused me a little bit at the end. Keep working on your drawing/animating, that stuff comes with time; but for now if you work on the narrative/jokes a little more, I could see the overall quality of your animation improving drastically. Don't give up, I look forward to seeing your future work!
Thanks for your response!
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