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Link was visiting his friends grave and someone appeared.
Watch it also on youtube and share if u want.
Great work, I am sure this took a while to do. Felt just like watching an anime. Colours and details conveyed what they needed to, so no problems there.
2 month with all my lazy powers
While your animating isn't too bad, your backgrounds leave something to be desired. It felt as if the characters were moving across a painted backdrop on a set, the world just lacked depth. Not to mention the transitions. They felt very odd at points, such as the screen wipe when Link was looking at the grave. The same transition worked earlier because the camera was panning in the proper direction, but when you have the camera scrolling vertically and then use a horizontal wipe, it just looks out of place. Speaking of the grave (which, mind you, I only learned WAS a grave by your description of the video which is not okay), your story telling and pacing was very poor. The way you handled the scene, It didn't feel that someone approached Link while he wasn't visiting the grave. It felt like an entirely different location, it didn't flow at all. The video just wasn't clear whatsoever, not even vaguely. Link shows up to some unestablished grave? Saria(?) showed up in a cloak? A skull kid (which aren't known to be killers in the Zelda universe, just troublemakers) knocks out Link and starts to suck out his soul? Saria was dead there? It was just a mess in the dark. You could argue "That's the point," but it still doesn't excuse it for me, it just feels lazy. Best of luck to you, I hope my review helps.
Thx for the review. I knew my story telling wasnt explained well, it was my firs time doing this kind of stuff and I shouldnt start with this animation, but I will improve doing more easy stuff.
I really dug the dark vibe to this, one of the coolest zelda fan animations I've seen for sure. Nice animation and BG's and especially effects work, looking forward to more stuff from you.
Thx, this mean a lot and encourage me to do more stuff
This is really good! I don't have much to say that is not nitpicky!
:D I hope you would watch my next video
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