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If you're reading this, you've been hacked. ƪ(˘⌣˘)ʃ
Dont use goanimate
For what reason?
I saw some previous reviews and your replies and thought I'd give some criticisms.
It may be "Satire" but its not funny. Mostly because the jokes have been used many times before this, and delivered in a funnier way. Also use real voices as others have said (Pls dont call me a motherfucker you'll hurt my feelings), mostly because a real voice can deliver lines and jokes better than a text to speech program can.
Another thing is the way you're presenting the "satire". I don't think I've ever laughed at a GoAnimate video. Satire is supposed to be funny. See where I'm going with this? I doesn't hurt to try out Adobe's 30-day free flash trial or ToonBoom's free trial. You could at least try OpenToonz to learn the 12 principles of animation and stuff like that. Anything but GoAnimate though.
Anyways I hope you appreciate this review, if you keep at it you could become a great animator, its not too hard if you like it and are passionate about it. It just takes time.
Like also stated before, I am switching over to Blender, Adobe Animate, SFM, etc. Thank-you for your detailed feedback. By the way, mother fucker, if I call you mother fucker it's a compliment.
we have been given you some criticism. Such as:
Actually animate, don't use goAnimate
Use real voices
Trust me, once these are done you'll be getting better reviews that what you are currently getting.
True, yet remember, the main reason I do what I do is simply for satire. I guess you mother fuckers can't see what I'm trying to prove with my "productions." Nevertheless, I will have actual animation and voice acting soon in my Abortionist, MLP Sex Ed, (and possibly) MLG Sed Ed videos.
In short, I need concrete criticism, i.e. the specifics. Also, I'm looking for some in terms of content as it is the real king. Thank you for clarifying that you Newgrounders hold an oddly pretentious bias.
Can you elaborate? I feel that most of you Newgrounders are nothing but flaccid idiots. If you can't come up with concrete criticism, at least tell me to kill myself. Seriously, comments like these get boring quick.
It's a lot better than your other animations.Needs more cowbell.
Can you explain the reason for this being better? Then, cowbell?
Thanks for the review; however, I'll need you to elaborate since I don't want to make assumptions.
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