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Please comment and send me feed back of this work. Still editing and adding sounds. Enjoy and Thanks for the advice and recomendation. Super Bori likes you.
It's a bit tough to watch without any audio, but here's what I can suggest based on this work in progress.
I would like to see the hero talk, as opposed to having to read a word bubble. If you were going for an updated comic style the word bubble might be cool, but since it's animated I would like to see his lips move and hear what you picture his voice sounding like, as opposed to having to imagine it.
Overall drawing skills aren't bad! The animation is a bit stiff though, I'd like to see varied poses in the smaller movements, instead of just body parts moving. The animation on the cat really needs to be smoothed out, with some new drawings instead of the same body parts tweaked and rotated.. Think about the tail! It would be flat on the ground, shoot upwards with the end dragging behind, maybe whirl in pain a bit, then slap the ground again! It's tough work at first, but the result is worth it!
I'd say keep on practicing drawing and sketching everyday, try to sketch more people from life and study anatomy some more (the internet is a great resource). Also, try to save up for a cheap mic if you don't have one yet, your audio quality won't be great at first but you can score yourself a cheap, usable microphone from walmart for no more than $20 or $30 bucks. (on that same note, I've learned that animating is a lot easier to do AFTER getting at least a rough audio down, so you're timing the drawings to the audio and not the audio to the drawings. That's been my recent experience, at least)
Also, study how things move a bit, with characters easing in and out of poses and using squash and stretch to exaggerate movement. Looks like you've got some real potential, just keep working at it. It's a long process. Upload the final product if you're able to add those sound fx and finish the editing!! Hope to see more from you eventually.
Thank you very much for everything, i need to practice drawing more poses and anatomy. And yes i have to work that robotic cat lol. And yes working with the audio already is more easy than drawing and adding sound and voice. I think im going to order one mic in amazon. Thanks
this is a nicely animated movie, with good drawings, nice style, good animation speed, and cool face expressions.
i also liked that the characters have speech bubbles, like in the comics.
so, in a way, this is an animated comic, lol! :D
but seriously, its good.
i also liked that the super bori dude was flying around, and he saw a child mistreating an animal.
since the hero asks for the kid to stop, and the kid continues to torture the poor animal, super bori goes in action and smacks the rude child with his club!
good work! justice is served!
i also like that this guy is a ''patriotic'' hero, just like captain america is, but your superhero has the colours of ''puerto rico''.
GOOD design, nice concept, and an interesting hero to watch.
if only you could add some english subtitles, and if your movie was a bit longer with more scenes, this would've been perfect.
but i still like it.
good work, keep it up, and do more!
thankyou very much for those words, this is a work in progress and i think this Animated Comic is my style because i work alone. Also i was thinking to put a older guy and not a young kid. And yes he is a Puertorican patriotic hero and his roots and powers come frome the native older civilitation (indias). I will keep up my work and try my best to improve this concept. Thanks again.
Nice animation. However, where is the sound and action?
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