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So i made this gif http://socsanimations.deviantart.com/art/Ninja-vs-Watermelon-611716895 and then decided to turn it into a full short, just to practice making this sort of thing.
I don't usually make longer animations like this, usually just walk cycles and stuff, so feedback and critiques are very welcome.
Music: Raw adventure by Kevin Macleod
Watermelon never stood a chance lol
Nicely done. But, I think it needs some sound effects when it comes to the blade and fruit slicing. If you need some sound effects there is plenty to download from Foley sites and Royalty free sites as well. I like the character movement and camera angles but I believe you can do much better.
Overall, well done and well animated.
Thankyou, and thanks for the suggestions, i'll be sure to check those sites out.
Great start. would have liked to see it go on a little longer, and maybe hear some slashing and splat sound effects. Other than that good job!
Thankyou! I'll be sure to add sound effects in future videos.
Of course the ninja wins! :D Was expecting the potential twist, but I'm glad it ended like it should've. Really slick animation too, and fast, had to watch a couple of times to catch that slice (looked the watermelon was slicing itself that first time). Creative; fluently done! Nice work.
Thankyou, and yeh you're right, i should've made the slice a bit more noticeable, maybe a few more frames there would've done it. Thanks for the feedback!
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