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Mike and Bruce think they are God's gift to creation. With their "enlightened" view of the world they are more than happy to share some knowledge with anyone willing to listen.
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Like what UrbanTowel says, I do see your copying Cyanide and Happiness's style but you do it with bigger eyes, hair and copy&paste the grin. I don't see the joke at all, and I certainly don't see how the two are dicks. It doesn't help that the animation is way too short, maybe if you took longer on the animation, the audience could know what the joke is. The music in the beginning was eh, reminded me of a cheesy cop show. The Warner bros circle is a nice touch, but you could've used your own originality of the circle. The animation isn't all that bad though, the voice acting is okay but it just doesn't fit the characters. When I look at Mike and Bruce, I thought their voices would be a stereotypical douchebag voice (since they're supposed to be dicks, and their hairstyles are styled like a douchebag) but instead, they both sounded like a stereotypical homosexual guy. In the description, what enlightened view? They barely say much, I can see they're being sarcastic but It's just too short. You need to find your own style and work on this more.
Yeah it's a style, I try to do a different one in each video. Working on one note jokes is tough - not all of them are hilarious, but more stuff to keep in mind for the future - thanks for the review.
Is this supposed to be a parody of Cyanide and Happiness? What was the joke? They talked about how easy being handicapped is, so it's obvious they are being sarcastic, but the description sounds like they are unaware of this? Try to think of a better idea next time and try not to rip off other peoples styles unless you are doing an obvious parody of something.
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