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It would serve you far greater to take a little more time and put at least a complete thought to each panel. That helps the entire audience understand enough of the storyline to 'get' the latest gag, joke, or purpose otherwise. It might seem counter-intuitive to make fans and followers wait, but it also makes your published works all the more appreciated when they come out and more valuable to those who follow. Rushing to get a little at a time tends to come across as fragmented and easily forgettable... even from one half of the gag to the punchline.
Stylewise and for technique, you clearly have the talent and skills. This is truly good art, so anything about that would only be nit-picking. Hope the best for you, and only wish to help.
Um... you could also qualify this under the "art" portal rather than "movies" but you're not the only one, so carry on as you see most fit.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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