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I enjoyed making this Flash Movie.
it was ok but...
wheres the ending? he dies? thats it he fired 3 shots and died. that my friend, is horrible, did he get the guy, did he kill the guy he shot in the hand? WHAT HAPPENED HERE!?
Lame, Just lame
It was pretty bad, the dialogue was cheesy and stripped the clip of any tension.
Also the ending was god awful and I hated it.
Flat out awful.
Im sorry. this one sucked alot. alot. wow. there was no story. it was a half assed flash with bad animation that had the intelect of a 8 year old. the story line was scetchy at best and very anticlimatic. the ending was no differnt. try harder next time.
just one question...
it was quite good and all but...
are you emo?
that was just too noir to even be noir...
it was just emo...
and you could work on the animation
and maybe a better ending y'know?
dude that was gggreeatt
i thought it was perfet.
erxcept for that weak ass ending. great job though!
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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