The animation is ok, the jokes interesting, but the mic work is horrible & static-y. I had a lot of trouble parsing out what was said. Even your comment at the end sounded like you were talking into a 40 year old CB mic wrapped in a sweat-sock padded with waxed paper.
At first I thought it was for the drive-through speaker effect, but let's face it; if 4/5th of the jokes are in the dialog, and I can't hear the dialog because of an "artistic choice", "for effect", it turns a fun little skit into a fail.
Half-score for my annoyance factor. If I could've heard this, I'd be inclined to fave & follow you. As it is, I'll wait & see if you re-master the voice work before I click fave.