Heh,
Now that was funny.
This is my debut single Indecency, a Comedy Hip Hop song not entirely unlike something you would hear from Lonely Island or Lil Dicky. Made in conjunction with http://www.supergreenstudios.com I hope you enjoy it!
Download the song for free at: https://soundcloud.com/johnnycarbon/indecency
Check it out on youtube at: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LiAXh69kBIM
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Heh,
Now that was funny.
Glad you enjoyed it!
The audio is fantastic! the recording sounds grate and everything is on spot with that.
I like the story it was awesomely made.
The drawings were clean but I feel like there could have been a little more ... animation. on some parts I was wondering if maybe the image is stuck on the screen (especially in the start)
Grate job overall
Yeah it was pretty heavy to get it all done in a reasonable time, but I don't think we cut too many corners. Thanks for the review!
"I should've switched to waterrrrr!"
Ok, this was better than I expected it to be. Of particular notes...
Strengths:
-Very good animations
-Very solid flow & rhythm that really complimented the very amusing story told in the lyrics
-LOVED the brief & very cool carnival-style breakdown in track
-Very cool to see the female character become as awkward as the main character later in the video; A good message of "being weird & indecent is ok"...mostly. lol
Weaknesses:
-The lyrics, overall, had a very fun vibe until the expletives started taking over. It wasn't overdone, but it was still enough for even my sailor mouth to notice. Cussin' is awesome. Period. But, there's still a time & place especially when the rest of the lyrics & story was trying to advertise this really, really odd character who has a very odd mix of characteristics AND the execution of the story was done better than expected.
Keep it up! You may be onto something here with being so indecent. :)
Cheers!
Gabriel
Founder & CEO
Nascent Games, LLC
Thanks man! Yeah it's pretty expletive-heavy but I don't think I went too overboard :)
Feel free to follow me on Youtube and Facebook since the next couple won't be animated and therefore not suitable for NG, that's if you're interested in following still!
Thanks for the comment!
The animation was really good.
I didn't enjoy the raps.
The clunky flow stood out to me as a long time rap fan.
People who don't listen to rap will probably enjoy it.
The story of the track was good.
I did like the beat.
I thought the colour selection was nice.
The animation style was simple but effective.
Looks like a lot of work went into it.
Overall a good, polished short. Great stuff!
Thanks man, appreciate the feedback!