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Yawn

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rated 3.00 / 5 stars
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cat
landscape
sleepy

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Uploaded
Mar 30, 2016 | 9:24 PM EDT

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I'm trying to get better at this animating thing. So, I would love some feedback.

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SimpleReviewerSimpleReviewer

Rated 4 / 5 stars

The background looked very nice and realistic, but the animal looked way too cartoony. Try making the animal look more realistic, or make the background more cartoony.


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acillustrations responds:

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KrutchesKrutches

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Great frame by frame, but make a story, add some sounds, some music.

Then you'd get somewhere.


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acillustrations responds:

Thank you!


Brick-ProductionsBrick-Productions

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Nice animation.
The tween frames need a little more refinement but still really good.
I would have liked some sound in there to help invite me to the world.
You could think of doing some more interesting angles to help break up the shot and lengthen the toon.
The colours were nice.

The highlight for me was the background , nice colours and great depth.

When i use a pan shot like that and i only have one subject to frame i try to make it a little slower so it is less jarring to the audience.


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acillustrations responds:

Thanks a lot! I will definitely try to add more to it next time.