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Steve and the Orc Freddy get into a lot of trouble
There were a number of areas that could be improved on this pilot.
The art was bit patchy and the audio was low quality.
The vocals need a bit of editing and the actor needs a bit more mic control.
Although it sounds a bit harsh i did enjoy this.
I thought it was well presented in the show format.
The direction was nice and the shot selection helped move the story forward.
If the art and audio was a bit cleaner this would be a great project.
Overall i did enjoy it, and will keep an eye out for the next one to see how it improves over time.
Keep up the good work!
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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