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After the terrible accident when the old market blows up due for an unknown reason. Ellie, Chuck and Juan back to work, but this time they will receive some newcomers and an unexpected guest
The art is meh but typically would be passable if the animation sat at decent quality. You use way too many mouth frames for sounds and words with one to two syllables and that's aside from the fact they barely matches the words themselves. The voice acting is bland but the mic quality was well controlled. The whole thing kind of teetered on delivering the message that you wanted it to be 'kooky' or chuckleworthy at best but it came across as something someone had an idea of rather than experience in. The background music and noises overpowered the voices at some points and the limbs sometimes twisted in very painful angles. That being said from what I can tell you're not deep into animation and writing just yet so for amateur level work this sits well above most early attempts. Keep working on it and you'll get there in due time.
Even If I respond very late(sorry), thanks for the feedback. I will work on that
Now this is an animation movie.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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