I think it's a start. I understand it is a work in progress, but I think you might have something here. It will need a little bit more substance, though. Obviously, getting some sound effects in there never hurts. However, I still feel it has potential once it gets rounded into form.
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No real story yet. Simply put, an air-power-heavy nation is attacking a rival nation, striking down bombers/cargo planes and the like.
I am aware that the rotors on the helicopters are messed up/displaced, and that the jet in the boat scene isn't fully exploding and such.
William-Turner responds:
Thanks, mate.
Yeah, progress on it has frozen because the Flash on the computer I'm using freezes every twenty minutes while this animation file is open. School-issued Macbook, so it's not the best and greatest for this sort of thing.
Yeah, I've been meaning to add sound effects, but again, it's a pain in the arse to even go back and look at one of the scenes- that, and sound might make my Flash lag up even more.
no sound and music, also abit more texturing it would have made it even more awesome, also the fighters wings look like bird wings????
William-Turner responds:
It's called a simple animation by someone who _just_ learned how to do this, and I'm learning by trial and error. Texturing would be PITA, sound effects would be PITA, music would be PITA. My goal was to make it obviously look like a fighter, obviously shooting down other stuff, and obviously getting shot at. If people look at my work and think "What is that?" rather than "What is that jet? Why is it shooting down that other bigger jet?" then I've failed. The wings are obvious so that they can be obvious.