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I'm new to animation and this is the first episode to my first animation project "CURSE". The art and animation are wonky, I animate with a mouse. I tried a tablet but for some reason I could never get used to it. So I'm saving up for a cintiq.
Keep up to date with me on this project at
Really nice job with this. You know know your art isn't great, but as strange as it seems you manage to be a good animator despite being a mediocre artist. You got bad drawings that move well. The drawings aren't necessarily that bad, though. The thing that bothered me the most was how high the girl's boobs were.
There were a couple of places where the humor fell flat. When all that treasure randomly falls out the guy's ass right when he denies being a thief, it feels cheesy and cliche. And when the villain says the plot needs an antagonist, that nearly ruins the whole story. You gotta decide whether you're taking this story seriously or not. You can go with the Newgrounds tradition of wacky nonsense comedy, but that doesn't seem to be what this is. You seem to be trying to get your audience to be invested in this, and so your characters are going to need motivations.
I wanna say really good job with the sound effects. I know sound is always a bitch, and your sound design stood out to me as skillfully done.
This was great I can't wait for the next one!!! Awesome job!!
It would have more fun if your characters are a little bit better. What do you think?
Good stuff, looking forward to the next episode.
I liked the use of 3d environments, it made the action and the drawings less flat. It worked great in the opening.
The voice acting was also nice and clean. Sounded good.
The only thing that pulled me out of it, was the meta antagonist joke. Dont know if you want to make this meta? Maybe it will be occuring more often in future episodes, but right now It caught me of guard.
I do hope you will be getting that cintiq and would love to see what you will create next.
I can see this work as a pre production or a test animation before you start the real thing. All in all this is pretty good. Other than that, I think the story is alright in my opinion.
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